Comments for Steven's Blog http://stevenv.edublogs.org Just another Edublogs.org weblog Wed, 24 Sep 2008 18:43:59 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on My Colour Poem by Austin http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/09/17/my-colour-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-12 Austin Wed, 24 Sep 2008 18:43:59 +0000 http://stevenv.edublogs.org/?p=6#comment-12 I really like your colour poem. I find it funny and it’s great how you included apple, grass and green a lot in the poem. I really like your colour poem. I find it funny and it’s great how you included apple, grass and green a lot in the poem.

]]> Comment on About by Sophie http://stevenv.edublogs.org/about/comment-page-1/#comment-11 Sophie Thu, 18 Sep 2008 21:03:32 +0000 #comment-11 Hey Steven! I really like the layout of your blog and thought I would leave a comment! I also like your banner image. Hey Steven! I really like the layout of your blog and thought I would leave a comment! I also like your banner image.

]]> Comment on The Cross Country by sokeina http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/05/30/the-cross-country/comment-page-1/#comment-10 sokeina Tue, 01 Jul 2008 09:41:31 +0000 http://stevenv.edublogs.org/?p=5#comment-10 Hi, I think that whoever made it must have tried their hardest because when i finished the race i felt like I was going to die and that my heart and throat were going to pop out of my body. Tooooooodles :D :P Hi,
I think that whoever made it must have tried their hardest because when i finished the race i felt like I was going to die and that my heart and throat were going to pop out of my body.
Tooooooodles :D :P

]]> Comment on The Cross Country by AllStars http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/05/30/the-cross-country/comment-page-1/#comment-9 AllStars Fri, 20 Jun 2008 12:52:19 +0000 http://stevenv.edublogs.org/?p=5#comment-9 A cute little post Steven! How did you feel while you were running? Were you confident? scared? happy? tired? It is always interesting for the reader to find out about how the author feels about the story. Do you think you could have put in some imaginative words to make your writing come alive? Remember our work on the image of the kids running like water? Don't forget next time to check your work with three friends before me (MrsP) to make sure you publish 3 *** quality work every time :) MrsP A cute little post Steven!

How did you feel while you were running? Were you confident? scared? happy? tired?

It is always interesting for the reader to find out about how the author feels about the story. Do you think you could have put in some imaginative words to make your writing come alive? Remember our work on the image of the kids running like water?

Don’t forget next time to check your work with three friends before me (MrsP) to make sure you publish 3 *** quality work every time :)

MrsP

]]> Comment on My Autobio Poem by Justin http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/03/26/my-autobio-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-8 Justin Fri, 13 Jun 2008 04:29:56 +0000 http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/03/26/my-autobio-poem/#comment-8 Hey Steven! Great poem man, i'm scared of spiders too, so how is your blog going. Getting to blog is so fun, cool and exciting. I hope you will have fun in the future. :D :mrgreen: Bye! Bye! Steven Hey Steven!

Great poem man, i’m scared of spiders too, so how is your blog going. Getting to blog is so fun, cool and exciting. I hope you will have fun in the future. :D :mrgreen:

Bye! Bye! Steven

]]> Comment on My Autobio Poem by Naomi http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/03/26/my-autobio-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-7 Naomi Sun, 25 May 2008 08:14:41 +0000 http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/03/26/my-autobio-poem/#comment-7 Hi Steven, I love christmas too :!: I never knew you were dad's cricketer. I really like to chew lollies :shock: Naomi :mrgreen: Hi Steven,
I love christmas too :!:
I never knew you were dad’s cricketer.
I really like to chew lollies :shock:
Naomi :mrgreen:

]]> Comment on My Autobio Poem by Haley http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/03/26/my-autobio-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Haley Mon, 05 May 2008 11:02:16 +0000 http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/03/26/my-autobio-poem/#comment-6 Nice man how did you do the top and good luck with the future.By Haley!!! Nice man how did you do the top and good luck with the future.By Haley!!!

]]> Comment on Hello world! by Ben.(Allstars) http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/03/05/hello-world/comment-page-1/#comment-5 Ben.(Allstars) Wed, 02 Apr 2008 03:51:54 +0000 #comment-5 Hey there steven mah lil buddy teheee!! i like the things you have done on ur blog xD!! lol but...... U SHOULD PUT MORE DETAILS ON IT:P aniwayz ima go now cya! TATATATA! Hey there steven mah lil buddy teheee!!
i like the things you have done on ur blog xD!! lol
but…… U SHOULD PUT MORE DETAILS ON IT:P
aniwayz ima go now cya!

TATATATA!

]]> Comment on My Autobio Poem by AllStars http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/03/26/my-autobio-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-4 AllStars Tue, 01 Apr 2008 10:51:56 +0000 http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/03/26/my-autobio-poem/#comment-4 Hello Steven! What a great poem - you sounnd very interesting :) I hope you are never chased by lions, tigers or sharks. MrsP Hello Steven!
What a great poem – you sounnd very interesting :)

I hope you are never chased by lions, tigers or sharks.

MrsP

]]> Comment on My Autobio Poem by MrsP http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/03/26/my-autobio-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-3 MrsP Thu, 27 Mar 2008 10:08:41 +0000 http://stevenv.edublogs.org/2008/03/26/my-autobio-poem/#comment-3 Great poem Steven - you told lots of interesting things about yourself. I like to eat chips and chocolate as well :) Great poem Steven – you told lots of interesting things about yourself. I like to eat chips and chocolate as well :)

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